{"id":415,"date":"2013-06-25T11:05:25","date_gmt":"2013-06-25T09:05:25","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/astronomy.lamost.org\/blog\/?p=415"},"modified":"2013-06-25T11:36:34","modified_gmt":"2013-06-25T09:36:34","slug":"%e4%bb%8e%e5%ae%a1%e7%a8%bf%e4%ba%ba%e9%97%ae%e9%a2%98%e5%ad%a6%e4%b9%a0%e5%a6%82%e4%bd%95%e5%86%99%e6%96%87%e7%ab%a0","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/astronomy.lamost.org\/blog\/?p=415","title":{"rendered":"\u4ece\u5ba1\u7a3f\u4eba\u95ee\u9898\u5b66\u4e60\u5982\u4f55\u5199\u6587\u7ae0\u4e4b1 \u6587\u7ae0\u7684\u79d1\u5b66\u610f\u4e49"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>\u5f88\u591a\u4eba\u82b1\u5f88\u591a\u65f6\u95f4\u521b\u9020\u4e86\u4e00\u9879\u201c\u6280\u672f\u201d\uff0c\u4f8b\u5982\u67d0\u7b97\u6cd5\u3002\u4f46\u662f\u8fd9\u6837\u7684\u6587\u7ae0\u80fd\u53d1\u5417\uff1f\u591a\u534a\u4f1a\u6536\u5230\u8fd9\u6837\u7684\u5ba1\u7a3f\u610f\u89c1\uff1a\u8fd9\u6587\u7ae0\u6709\u79d1\u5b66\u4ef7\u503c\u5417\uff1f\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\u4f8b\u5b50\u4e00<\/p>\n<p>What is this paper really about? How has scientific understanding of the  Universe been improved by this work? <span style=\"color: #ff0000;\">Even if this is a &#8220;techniques&#8221;  paper, <span style=\"color: #000000;\">i<\/span><\/span>t needs to demonstrate CLEARLY how well the technique works now  and will work for future data, and how that future work will improve  scientific understanding of the Universe. The answers to these questions  are not clear in the paper, and without clear answers, <span style=\"color: #ff0000;\">the paper is  likely to be rejected by a journal referee.<\/span><br \/>\n\u4fee\u6539\uff1a<\/p>\n<p>Additions to Introduction to emphasize:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li> This paper emphasizes methodology to \u3002\u3002\u3002<\/li>\n<li> Show simulations to test<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>The conclusion section has been re-written:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li> &#8216;demonstrated a range of strategies for \u3002\u3002\u3002<span style=\"color: #ff0000;\">\uff08\u73b0\u72b61\uff09<\/span><\/li>\n<li> List the strategies that are used\u3002\u3002\u3002 <span style=\"color: #ff0000;\">\uff08\u73b0\u72b62\uff09<\/span><\/li>\n<li> Point out success in reaching \u3002\u3002\u3002\u3002<span style=\"color: #ff0000;\">\uff08\u6210\u529f1\uff09<\/span><\/li>\n<li> Point out that this <span style=\"color: #ff0000;\">is good enough to <\/span>\u3002\u3002\u3002<span style=\"color: #ff0000;\">\uff08\u6210\u529f2\uff09<\/span><\/li>\n<li> Point out that we did well for 20 Mpc, but need improvements for 200 Mpc \uff08<span style=\"color: #ff0000;\">\u4e0d\u8db3<\/span>\uff09<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>\u7ecf\u8fc7\u4e0a\u8ff0\u4fee\u6539\uff0c\u6587\u7ae0\u5177\u6709\u4ef7\u503c\u7684\u7ed3\u6784\u5c31\u6709\u4e86\uff0c\u5269\u4e0b\u7684\u5c31\u662f\u5982\u4f55\u5ffd\u60a0 \u6210\u529f1 \u6210\u529f2 \u4e86\u3002\u3002\u3002<\/p>\n<p>\u4f8b\u5b50\u4e8c<\/p>\n<p>In other words, I feel that the authors need to bring the results obtained for the\u00a0<span style=\"color: #0000ff;\"> xxx <\/span> into context,<br \/>\ndiscussing implications and insights on <span style=\"color: #0000ff;\">yy<\/span> populations. <span style=\"color: #ff0000;\">Even if the aim of the authors is to demonstrate the applicability of their method, they need to discuss what new insights are derived from their analysis in our understanding of <span style=\"color: #0000ff;\">xy <\/span>galaxies.<\/span><\/p>\n<p>\u5347\u7ea7\u6587\u7ae0\uff1a<br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #ff0000;\">Comparison\u00a0 xxx\u00a0 with<\/span> yyy<\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #ff0000;\">Comparison xxx with<\/span> yyyy .<\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #ff0000;\">we suggested that<\/span> Ellipticals contribute a <span style=\"color: #ff0000;\">significant population<\/span> for \u3002\u3002\u3002\u3002,<span style=\"color: #ff0000;\"> explain the puzzle of<\/span> \u3002\u3002\u3002\u3002 and <span style=\"color: #ff0000;\">confirm the nature of <\/span>\u3002\u3002\u3002 <span style=\"color: #ff0000;\">by our<\/span><span style=\"color: #ff0000;\"><span style=\"color: #ff0000;\"> method<\/span> \u3002 <\/span><span style=\"color: #ff0000;\">We also argue that <\/span>our\u00a0 models are needed to investigate the detail properties of xxx .<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>\u5f88\u591a\u4eba\u82b1\u5f88\u591a\u65f6\u95f4\u521b\u9020\u4e86\u4e00\u9879\u201c\u6280\u672f\u201d\uff0c\u4f8b\u5982\u67d0\u7b97\u6cd5\u3002\u4f46\u662f\u8fd9\u6837\u7684\u6587\u7ae0\u80fd\u53d1\u5417\uff1f\u591a\u534a\u4f1a\u6536\u5230\u8fd9\u6837\u7684\u5ba1\u7a3f\u610f\u89c1\uff1a\u8fd9\u6587\u7ae0\u6709\u79d1\u5b66\u4ef7&#8230;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-415","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-1"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"http:\/\/astronomy.lamost.org\/blog\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/415","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"http:\/\/astronomy.lamost.org\/blog\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"http:\/\/astronomy.lamost.org\/blog\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/astronomy.lamost.org\/blog\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/astronomy.lamost.org\/blog\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=415"}],"version-history":[{"count":8,"href":"http:\/\/astronomy.lamost.org\/blog\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/415\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":423,"href":"http:\/\/astronomy.lamost.org\/blog\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/415\/revisions\/423"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"http:\/\/astronomy.lamost.org\/blog\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=415"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/astronomy.lamost.org\/blog\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=415"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/astronomy.lamost.org\/blog\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=415"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}